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Your draft article, Draft:Gustavo José Fernando Bolivar De Jesús Illingworth Baquerizo
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Club de la Unión (February 11)
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- Promotional tone, editorializing and other words to watch
- Vague, generic, and speculative statements extrapolated from similar subjects
- Essay-like writing
- Hallucinations (plausible-sounding, but false information) and non-existent references
- Close paraphrasing
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- Thank you for the feedback and you are absolutely right, I used it as a base but edited sources and verified manually, also added relevant info such as buildings and some individuals I saw listed as prominent members to help explain more. It's a very rich institution so much more to add hope the rest of the community can contribute too. Sources are correctly added and yes much to add on the library itself Daiv373 (talk) 11:42, 12 February 2026 (UTC)
- @Daiv373 - thanks for improving the draft. And the approach of doing a shorter article first and expanding later is also a good way forward. Spanish wikipedia has a substantial article on the library, as I am sure you are aware. The three problems with the article now are that
- a) Source five, the club's history page simply does not say that diplomats etc used to be members. That's an LLM fabrication, and we can't allow that.
- b) Some language is promotional - as an encyclopedia we tend to be quite boring in our choice of words. That is easy to fix.
- c) Also the list of notable members - Wikipedia isn't a directory. My suggestion there would be to restrict it just to those people who already have Wikipedia entries, I think that is 6 men; plus if any other names really should get an entry in Wikipedia one day (though I didn't see any other names). Where did you get this list of names from? Since it isn't sourced and some are still alive, we have particular policies on verification there.
- If you wish, I can edit the article for you, but you may prefer to do it. ChrysGalley (talk) 13:32, 12 February 2026 (UTC)
- Well source 5 if you click on it lower on the page says "socios del club la Union" then says the quote by Carlos Alberto Arroyo and lists him as a member of the club and past Ecuadorian President, if you slide it does the same for Otto Arosemena, and recently Guillermo Lasso. As for the rest of the members it was off the book with the history of the club by Jose Gomez Iturralde it has major members and founding members, I noted the munipa article also used it some of the tome by Ezzio Garay on Guayaquil's historical society. That source is available on scribd. I'll make a quick edit to address those issues, but I would appreciate your help in refining it and preparing it for publication if you have the time. Daiv373 (talk) 14:31, 12 February 2026 (UTC)
- I did some corrections and removed some language, you can edit what you deem necessary thank you ! Daiv373 (talk) 14:47, 12 February 2026 (UTC)
